Pink vs Gray

Posted: January 18, 2023 in Friday Fictioneers
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Thanks to Rochelle for continuing to be our Fairy Blog Mother and to Na’ama for providing this very pink picture.

Samuel consistently wore pink shirts, pink socks, pink dungarees, and gum boots. Mother didn’t mind; she’d wanted a girl. Nor Father. In fact, he thought pink enhanced his son’s pale complexion. Who did mind? His classmates. Often, they rolled him in the mud to “erase the pink” and added a punch to his nose and kick to the ribs just for good measure.

Of course, Samuel grew up. And after years of trial and error, found the perfect girl. Kindly, she filled his closet with the subdued gray clothing he thought he’d been wearing all along.

Comments
  1. Oh no! The poor chap is colourblind. How awful to go through all that. Great story!

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  2. neilmacdon says:

    A konckout last line

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  3. James Pyles says:

    Actually, a pink shirt with a gray suit looks terrific.

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  4. pennygadd51 says:

    Teehee! That’s a very imaginative plot for your story.

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  5. Iain Kelly says:

    Haha, that’s a great twist at the end. Well done 🙂

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  6. Dear Lish,

    I’m glad I wasn’t drinking anything when I read that last line. I’m sure I would’ve spewed. Poor guy, you’d think someone might have picked up on his colorblindness long before that. Love it.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  7. James McEwan says:

    If only he knew. This reminds me of the Johnny Cash song, “A Boy Named Sue”.

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  8. Ooh! Interesting twist! Well done!

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  9. Sandra says:

    I thought we were going entirely somewhere else with this. 🙂 Good one, Lish.

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  10. Liz Young says:

    That was his parents’ fault for buying them! Athough, to be fair, my husband loved pink – he said it took a real man to wear pink.

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    • His parents embraced the fact that he wore pink. My husband wore pink a couple of times, and it looked stellar on him. One evening our ex bro in law made fun of him. Bye-bye, pink sweater.

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  11. Bill says:

    We all see the world so differently, It’s a wonder we can communicate at all.

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  12. Poor dude! Sometimes it helps to simply ask kids some “Why” questions, eh? I’m glad he found someone who had!

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  13. athling2001 says:

    How horrible for him! Well done.

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  14. If only he’d known, how different his schooldays would have been.

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  15. poetisatinta says:

    Haha – just perfect! 🙂

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  16. Nobbinmaug says:

    Kids are cruel. Unfortunately, it’s human nature to rail against anything different. Good twist. Even though it’s in the title, I didn’t take it literally.

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  17. michael1148humphris says:

    I did not expect the ending…

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  18. CGraith says:

    Cute! So much said in this little piece!

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  19. plaridel says:

    an ending i didn’t expect. good one. 🙂

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  20. msjadeli says:

    My first thought was he’d blocked the trauma out but some part of him started buying grey clothes instead. Now you see how my synapses connect. An interesting story, Alicia.

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  21. Awww…bless his heart.

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  22. Laurie Bell says:

    Oh and perhaps colour-blindness runs in the family. Poor kiddo. But pink is a great colour on lads and lasses. Glad to see it more and more these days.

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  23. Tannille says:

    Kids can be so cruel. Pink is just a colour. It’s strange one colour can have that much power.

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  24. It is so important to find someone who is kind and who truly sees us. Such a nice story.

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